Always Give a Reason

Whenever you discount a product or hold a sale, always give a reason for why you are doing it.

I was reminded of this just the other day while getting family photos at Sears. They had a flier laying out on one of the side tables. On the front page, it said:

CRAZIEST DEAL EVER

Oops! Someone forgot to turn off the Paint Machine when they went on break! Now we have a surplus of Pacific Blue Kenmore Washers and Dryers — loaded with great features. Over 3,000 pairs to sell — it’s our craziest deal ever!

Buy a Dryer, Get a Washer FREE

While this copy could definitely be improved, I was impressed that a big company would even go this far to provide a reason for the sale.

The lazy way to do it would have been to merely run the sale: Buy one, get one free. They took it one step farther by turning a negative situation (too many blue washers and dryers) into a humorous story and a believable reason for a sale.

Did someone really forget to turn off the paint machine? Probably not. But it’s a fun story. We can imagine it’s true. And it’s far better than the other story: That is, nobody wants blue appliances.

Are you overstocked? Or do you simply want a quick cash infusion? Then hold a sale and give a reason why you’re discounting your product or service. Works like magic, I tell ya.

-Ryan M. Healy

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Ryan Healy

Ryan Healy is a freelance copywriter, list manager, and the author of Speed Writing for Nonfiction Writers. Since 2002, he has worked with scores of clients, including Agora Financial, Lombardi Publishing, and Contrarian Profits. He writes a popular blog about copywriting, advertising, and business growth, has been featured in publications like Feed Front magazine, and has been published on sites like WordStream.com, SmallBizClub.com, and MarketingForSuccess.com.

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