Hot Date with an Ugly Sales Letter
Happy Valentine’s Day!
Since my wife and kids are sick today — bad coughs because of some respiratory bug — there won’t be a lot of romance going on here today.
But I’m not going to let that stop me from cuddling up by the fire with another sales letter… maybe yours!
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I’m looking for a hot date with an ugly sales letter! Can
you help? >>> http://www.ryanhealy.com/copy-critique
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As you may recall, I’m currently offering 8 copy critiques at 40% off the regular price. You pay only $300 for your copy critique.
Just yesterday I finished the first critique. He ordered it on Feb 8 and I finished it on Feb 13, well under my 14-day turn-around guarantee.
Here are some relevant stats:
- I inserted 18 comments right into his sales letter pointing out trouble spots and areas for improvement.
- I wrote 2 new headlines for potential testing.
- Plus, I wrote 1,397 words — 5 pages! — of feedback that was sent in a separate document. (The sales letter was 2,512 words, including testimonials. I wrote more than HALF that in feedback.)
Of course, I can’t guarantee a certain number of comments or headlines or pages when I do your critique.
But I can guarantee I will give you my best suggestions to strengthen your copy so you get more sales.
So what do you say?
For only $300 I’ll get all cozy with your sales letter and show you exactly what changes to make so you can romance more sales out of it.
Click here to order your copy critique.
-Ryan M. Healy
